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"THERE WAS A GIRL BEING BULLIED AT THEIR SCHOOL,AND WHEN THERE BULLYING GOT TOO MUCH THE GIRL WAS TRANSFERRED TO ANOTHER SCHOOL BECAUSE SHE WAS BEING BULLIED TOO MUCH AND WHEN SHE ARRIVED AT HER NEW SCHOOL SOMEONE TALKED TO HER AND BECAME FRIENDS FOR LIFE SO IT WAS NO LONGER SAD AND LOST HER FEAR IN THE PAST LIFE"
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there was a girl that was being bullied at school. when the bullying got worse, her parents opted to transfer her into another school because she couldn't handle it anymore. when she arrived at her new school, someone approached her and they became friends for life, which made her forget the traumatic events that she went through in her school before.