What's More Read the excerpt that follows. You may take down notes as you read it. After reading the excerpt, you need to do the following:
1. Indicate the pattern of paragraph development used and illustrate it by using any appropriate type of graphic organizer to visually display the ideas or concepts presented.
2. Using your graphic organizer, write your improved version of the paragraph by using the appropriate transitional expressions.

An excerpt from Appassionato​