rewrite as directed: 1 when we had finished, it was nearly dark.(TURN INTO SIMPLE)2.inside it wasn't too cold for us to take off our gloves(REMOVE TOO) 3 . even in our sleeping bags we wore all our clothes. (USE 'THOUGH). 4. by midnight there was no wind at all. (TURN INTO AFFIRMATIVE) 5. most important of all was the red scarf round my neck (CHANGE THE DEGREE) 6. how lucky Hillary and i were at that time (TURN INTO ASSERTIVE) 7 . it was one of the most dangerous bits of climbing I had ever done(CHANGE THE DEGREE).8 the ridge was narrower than it had been.(TURN INTO POSITIVE DEGREE). 9 there was only one possible way.(USE 'NONE BUT')10. instead of climbing along the ridge all the way , we moved over to the left. (TURN INTO COMPOUND) .. MAKE SURE THEY ARE GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT
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3) We wore all our clothes, even though we were in our sleeping bags.
4)by midnight, wind had stopped totally.
5)The red scarf round my neck, was more important than anything else.
6)Hillary and I were indeed very lucky at that time.
9) There was none but one possible way.