Persuasive writing states and supports an opinion. Based on the given statements,write your own persuasive text using the structure (l+3BR+C)
Some people think that recess in school should be longer. They believe kids might learn better if they had a longer break in the middle of the day. However the extra class time after recess would make the school day longer.Therefore kids would get out of school later in the day. What do you think? Support your opinion with persuasive writing.
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It is essential that recess is longer. If not, students won’t be able to focus in class, get enough exercise to be healthy, or interact with other kids and make friends. Therefore, recess must be longer. if students have longer recess they will burn off energy and can focus more in class. Also, students need time to clear their minds and absorb what they learned. Recess gives students something to look forward to so they will work harder in class.As you probably already know, recess is a chance to get exercise and receive Vitamin D from the sun. If students don’t get exercise they won’t be healthy.Students need to be healthy to do well in school. Students need recess to interact with each other and make friends. If they have even longer recess they will make even more friends. If students have friends in school and in class they won’t get bored in school.
These reasons Focus, Exercise, and Student Interaction demonstrate why recess absolutely has to be longer. The time to act is now, because if we don’t act now, when? When will we make longer recess so children will be happier and healthier? Obviously, we act now or never.
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