hi guys can you correct the grammar of my essay about my family thank you:)
when my sister and I were kids my families and I were always happy but when my father and mother separated, that's when my sister and I started our sadness, my father didn't leave us but my mother left us,
and now he is a single dad, my dad went to manila to find a job to earn money, so we could have something to eat and finish school,
even though my sister and I were upset that he is going to manila,
but it was also for us why did my father go to manila.
and we weren’t always with my dad at christmas and his birthday.
when my parents separated my grandmother and grandfather took care of us. thanks to my grandma and grandpa for taking care of us and they will give their love to us and we love them too.
My sister's name is (yn) and she is always an honor at school,
and my sister is easily get angry but she is kind and cheerful,
sometimes my sister is joking.
and my name is (y/n) and I'm a naughty and stubborn child and happy, and sometimes greedy, and when I was 5-6 years old I was honored but when I was 7 years old and until now I have not been honored in school I envy my sister sometimes because she always honors me but I'm still proud of my sister because she always honors me.
and now there is a covid that is very hard in our lives but we don't give up we just fight because that hardship will also disappear.
when my sister and I were kids my families and I were always happy but when my father and mother separated, that's when my sister and I started our sadness, my father didn't leave us but my mother left us,
and now he is a single dad, my dad went to manila to find a job to earn money, so we could have something to eat and finish school,
even though my sister and I were upset that he is going to manila,
but it was also for us why did my father go to manila.
and we weren’t always with my dad at christmas and his birthday.
when my parents separated my grandmother and grandfather took care of us. thanks to my grandma and grandpa for taking care of us and they will give their love to us and we love them too.
My sister's name is (yn) and she is always an honor at school,
and my sister is easily get angry but she is kind and cheerful,
sometimes my sister is joking.
and my name is (y/n) and I'm a naughty and stubborn child and happy, and sometimes greedy, and when I was 5-6 years old I was honored but when I was 7 years old and until now I have not been honored in school I envy my sister sometimes because she always honors me but I'm still proud of my sister because she always honors me.
and now there is a covid that is very hard in our lives but we don't give up we just fight because that hardship will also disappear.
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When my sister and I were kids, my family and I were always happy, but when my father and mother separated, that's when my sister and I started our sadness. My father didn't leave us, but my mother left us,
My father traveled to Manila in search of work so that we could eat and finish school.
Even though my sister and I were upset that he was going to Manila,
But it was also for us why my father went to Manila.
and we weren’t always with my dad at Christmas and his birthday.
When my parents separated, my grandmother and grandfather took care of us. We are grateful to my grandma and grandpa for taking care of us. They will give their love to us and we love them too.
My sister's name is (yn) and she is always an honor at school.
My sister is easily angry, but she is kind and cheerful.
Sometimes my sister is joking.
I'm a naughty and stubborn child, happy and sometimes greedy. When I was 5 or 6 years old, I was honored, but when I was 7 years old, I was not honored in school. I envy my sister sometimes because she always honors me, but I'm still proud of my sister because she always honors me.
And now there is a condition that is very hard in our lives, but we don't give up. We just fight because that hardship will also disappear.
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Not sure if correct but I tried!