i guess this is the best poem i have ever wrote what do you guys think?

Your beauty, it shone like a summer’s day
Your voice, it was like a symphony’s play
Your presence, it was like a gentle breeze
Your touch, it made my heart at ease

Your laugh, it was like the sweetest song
Your smile, it made everything right and strong
Your eyes, they sparkled like the morning dew
Your love, it was always so true

Though we are no longer together
My heart still holds you as a feather
I’ll never forget the times we shared
And all the memories that we had

I’ll always love you no matter what
And carry on with my heart so true
I’ll never forget the love we had
And I’ll always think of you.​