Instructions: improve the following sentences applying the features of academic writing.
Then, change the underlined word. Choose your answer from the word pool
and write it on the space provided.
Exemple: The committee has made a good progress.
Answer The committee has made a considerable progress.
assists
encouraging are not
accumulated determine
investigated
fluctuating
saw assists
is not
her/his
decrease
1. This is my recommendation.
2. The evidences presented aren't substantial.
3. The results of the program have been pretty good.
4. The last paragraph isn't necessary anymore; so, it was deleted.
5. Finally, they would like to find out the root cause of the problem.
6. The proponents of the project looked into the profile of the beneficiaries.
7. Investigators observed how a falling debris built up around the crime scene.
8. The Office of the Vice President helps out in the distribution of relief goods.
9. The report indicated that now COVID-19 cases last December 2020 were going up and
down.
10. In the first set up, the group agreed to cut down the amount of starch to the mixture to
obtain the right consistency.​