As you can see depression has a huge impact in our life, while we all experience sadness, irritability, or poor moods occasionally, some people do so severely, over a protracted period of time and occasionally for no apparent cause.
Depression is a serious disorder that affects both physical and mental health and is more than just a bad mood. The good news is that there are effective treatments for depression that can be used. A depressed person can recover faster the earlier they seek help. So we should help someone who suffers from depression especially if a family member is going through them because they will need all the support that we can give them.
Hi! I saw your comment about giving tips on making a better conclusion so here are my tips:
1. Summarize the main points of the essay. As you can see in my answer I restated that depression affects both mental and physical health which was introduced on the body of the essay.
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2. Don't overdo your conclusion. Restate just the main points do not state all of what you said on the body because that will be repetitive and would make your essay less appealing.
3. Practice. You can make a better essay by practicing writing and also reading more essays so that you can get more perspectives about many topics.
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4. Increase your vocabulary. It will greatly help you if you know many words to use on your essay but as I said on number 2 do not overdo it. Choose the words that you will use carefully when writing you don't want your words to be too hard to understand.
*Also when you notice that a word is often used in your essay search for their synonyms so they will not be repetitive.
For example: Instead of always using the word 'and' try to use additionally, moreover, in addition, etc.
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As you can see depression has a huge impact in our life, while we all experience sadness, irritability, or poor moods occasionally, some people do so severely, over a protracted period of time and occasionally for no apparent cause.
Depression is a serious disorder that affects both physical and mental health and is more than just a bad mood. The good news is that there are effective treatments for depression that can be used. A depressed person can recover faster the earlier they seek help. So we should help someone who suffers from depression especially if a family member is going through them because they will need all the support that we can give them.
Hi! I saw your comment about giving tips on making a better conclusion so here are my tips:
1. Summarize the main points of the essay. As you can see in my answer I restated that depression affects both mental and physical health which was introduced on the body of the essay.
3. Practice. You can make a better essay by practicing writing and also reading more essays so that you can get more perspectives about many topics.
*Also when you notice that a word is often used in your essay search for their synonyms so they will not be repetitive.
For example:
Instead of always using the word 'and' try to use additionally, moreover, in addition, etc.
Hope this helps!