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Correct the following sentences with improper parallel structure.
1. Sabrina has wit, charm, and she has an extremely pleasant personality.
2. In English class, Shine learned to read poems critically and she appreciated good prose.
3. Coach Fred was a brilliant strategist, a caring mentor, and a friend who is wise.
4. We found the film repulsive, offensive,and we thought it was embarrassing.
5. Mr.Travis kept his store clean, neat,and he had it conveniently arranged.
6. The coach told his player that they should get plenty of water,to not eat sugary snacks, and be sure they are getting plenty of sleep.
7. At the party, my sister helped us make the cake, gathering the kids for games, clean up, and to drive some kids home.
8. Exercises that I enjoy doing are marathon running, to swim lengths in a pool, and riding my bicycle in the park.
9. The protestors were gathering outside, starting to shout loudly and stopped the speaker from being heard.
10. To my horror, my wedding dress looked stained, torn and it had wrinkles.
Correct the following sentences with improper parallel structure.
1. Sabrina has wit, charm, and she has an extremely pleasant personality.
2. In English class, Shine learned to read poems critically and she appreciated good prose.
3. Coach Fred was a brilliant strategist, a caring mentor, and a friend who is wise.
4. We found the film repulsive, offensive,and we thought it was embarrassing.
5. Mr.Travis kept his store clean, neat,and he had it conveniently arranged.
6. The coach told his player that they should get plenty of water,to not eat sugary snacks, and be sure they are getting plenty of sleep.
7. At the party, my sister helped us make the cake, gathering the kids for games, clean up, and to drive some kids home.
8. Exercises that I enjoy doing are marathon running, to swim lengths in a pool, and riding my bicycle in the park.
9. The protestors were gathering outside, starting to shout loudly and stopped the speaker from being heard.
10. To my horror, my wedding dress looked stained, torn and it had wrinkles.
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1. Sabrina is wit, charm, and pleasant.
2. In English class, Shine learned to read poems critically and to appreciate good prose.
3. Coach Fred was a brilliant strategist, a caring mentor, and a wise friend.
4. We found the film repulsive, offensive, and embarrassing.
5. Mr. Travis kept his store clean, neat, and arranged.
6. The coach told his player that they should get plenty of water, not eat sugary snacks, and get plenty of sleep.
7. At the party, my sister helped us make the cake, gather the kids for games, clean up, and drive some kids home.
8. Exercises that I enjoy doing are marathon running, swimming in a pool, and riding my bicycle in the park.
9. The protestors were gathering outside, starting to shout loudly and stopping the speaker from being heard.
10. To my horror, my wedding dress looked stained, torn and wrinkled.