ed loves his hamster, hippy and took good care of him before school ed would carefully feed hippy when he came home from school hippy would be so glad to see ed that he would jump on his wheel and run as fast as school somtimes ed would let hippy out to run around his room
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I loved my hamster, Hippy, and I took excellent care of him. I would gently feed Hippy before school. Hippy would be so happy to see me when I got home from school that he would get on his wheel and run as quickly as he could. I would occasionally allow Hippy out of his room to run around.