D. Write an amazing story that you experienced or watched on the television or heard
over the radio. Indicate the theme and encircle the point of view used in your story.
(17-20)
Features
• Piece was written
in unique style and
voice
. Very informative
and organized
• Piece had few
style and voice
Gives new
information but
poorly organized
• Piece had no style
and voice Gives
few information
but poorly
organized
Quality of
Writing
• Piece was written
in interesting style
and voice
Somewhat
informative and
organized
• Few spelling
punctuation errors.
and minor
grammatical errors
Grammar
Usage and
Mechanics
• Virtually no
spelling
punctuation or
grammatical
errors
• A number of
spelling,
punctuation and
grammatical errors
So many spelling
punctuation, and
grammatical errors
Answers & Comments
Once a upon a time, there was a little girl named Lisa, she lived in the forest, she had so many animal friends in the forest but one night, there was a giant evil demon attacking the forest, fire everywhere, all the tree, bushes, and her house! everything was burned... she was the only one who was left behind.. she traveled so long to find help, she heard about this "Crystal of Magical" and tried to find it to restore peace.. she found an old lady walking around, she followed her talked to her saying "do you know where's the crystal of magical?" the old lady said, "yes, i do... it is in your heart, it was always in your heart..." then the old lady vanished into thin air...she came back to the forest and everything was all back to normal, she then woke up then she thought all of that was just a dream... The End.
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