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"Effects of social media"
Social media is a good tool because we can learn many stuffs not only that we also use social media for our daily life, millions of people around the world uses social media.
One of the most obvious effects of social media is its ability to connect people from different parts of the world.
-PROVIDE SUPPORTING EVIDENCE
Another effect of social media is its ability to influence our behavior. Studies have shown that people who spend more time on social media are more likely to engage in risky behaviors such are also moreas drinking alcohol or smoking cigarettes. they qre most likely to be influence by what they see on social media.
In conclusion, social media has bath positivi and negative effects on individuals and society as a whole.
-YOUR ARGUMENTS IS THE BODY OF YOUR ESSAY SHOULD BACK UP TO YOUR THESIS STATEMENT.
-IF YOUR THESIS IS POSITIVE YOU MUST PROVIDE POSITIVE EVIDENCE AND THE OTHER WAY AROUND.
"Effects of social media"
Social media is a good tool because we can learn many stuffs not only that we also use social media for our daily life, millions of people around the world uses social media.
One of the most obvious effects of social media is its ability to connect people from different parts of the world.
-PROVIDE SUPPORTING EVIDENCE
Another effect of social media is its ability to influence our behavior. Studies have shown that people who spend more time on social media are more likely to engage in risky behaviors such are also moreas drinking alcohol or smoking cigarettes. they qre most likely to be influence by what they see on social media.
In conclusion, social media has bath positivi and negative effects on individuals and society as a whole.
-YOUR ARGUMENTS IS THE BODY OF YOUR ESSAY SHOULD BACK UP TO YOUR THESIS STATEMENT.
-IF YOUR THESIS IS POSITIVE YOU MUST PROVIDE POSITIVE EVIDENCE AND THE OTHER WAY AROUND.
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"Effect of social media"
Social media is a good tool for us because we can learn a lot of stuff
not only that, but we also can use social media for our daily life millions of people around the world uses social media. We can also use social media to talk to our relatives or family members who are far away.
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I added more to your paragraph about "social media."
I think your effects about it are already good.